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	<title>Comments on: Essay intro help please&#8211;Is this strong enough to get me into a university??</title>
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		<title>By: cfromc</title>
		<link>http://learnkhmer.org/essay-intro-help-please-is-this-strong-enough-to-get-me-into-a-university/comment-page-1/#comment-464</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Nov 2008 21:14:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>change the last line. not too good, honestly.
you said &quot;they have made it difficult for me to seek help from them regarding my school work&quot;. don&#039;t say anything that makes you sound stupid. i think you should be more broad.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>change the last line. not too good, honestly.<br />
you said &quot;they have made it difficult for me to seek help from them regarding my school work&quot;. don&#39;t say anything that makes you sound stupid. i think you should be more broad.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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		<title>By: dlb_blair</title>
		<link>http://learnkhmer.org/essay-intro-help-please-is-this-strong-enough-to-get-me-into-a-university/comment-page-1/#comment-463</link>
		<dc:creator>dlb_blair</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Nov 2008 20:55:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Try fleshing out your essay more.  In what ways do you depend on them for your education?  Has their inability to speak English had any positive effects on your education?  If so, what?  How does your background influence your perspective of education?&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Try fleshing out your essay more.  In what ways do you depend on them for your education?  Has their inability to speak English had any positive effects on your education?  If so, what?  How does your background influence your perspective of education?<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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